snivylovegames
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Post by snivylovegames on Nov 11, 2024 1:59:30 GMT
You only what seems to pop into existence in a factory like building. You aren't robotic... you aren't fake... your completely organic. All you can see are the ticking of machinery and other mohawk cats like your self. after what feels like forever you are at the end of it all. Your taken to a classroom like area with others who look exactly like you... no difference in sight. In said room a " professor cat jobs " teaches you everything... what you will do... where you will go. Your nothing but a meat shield... Your supposed to die to protect others... but your not scared in fact no one else is. You and every other cat are organic super weapons. After learning this your already taken to go fight for the cat army. as soon as your deployed a sense of bloodshed courses through your veins... you must kill... as you hit the front lines it's complete chaos... doges, snakes, bears, moths. and more all fighting with the army you reside in. You watch as the cats you once knew are torn to shreds... you are next. You fought bravely but that couldn't save you... in one fell swoop your already dead. Your soul floats away upwards... but nothing awaits you. It's only a black cold void... You will sit here for the rest of existence... or will you? You appear once more... no memories... nothing... but truly... care to do it once more?
and thats my head canon! I hope my writing was good!
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snivylovegames
I post daily polls about the battle cats to try and bring the Forums closer together!
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Post by snivylovegames on Nov 11, 2024 2:17:37 GMT
I think my writing needs heavy work so I'd like feed back!
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Post by SomewhatOfficialTapeDispenser on Nov 11, 2024 3:51:11 GMT
The biggest criticism I can think of is probably your "your"s. Your is a possessive, describing something on you or something you own, like "Your arm" or "Your house". You're is a combination of you and are, such as "You're walking down the street".
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snivylovegames
I post daily polls about the battle cats to try and bring the Forums closer together!
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Post by snivylovegames on Nov 11, 2024 3:53:06 GMT
I have grammer issues and have my whole life... but I still do like trying!
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snivylovegames
I post daily polls about the battle cats to try and bring the Forums closer together!
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Post by snivylovegames on Nov 11, 2024 3:54:46 GMT
To summarize the yapping tho- Is that the battle cats are organic super weapons with no regard for their own lives and when they die they are re-made to fight once more.
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Post by SomewhatOfficialTapeDispenser on Nov 11, 2024 3:57:40 GMT
My headcanon about battle cats is that all the units have their own lives, and they live peacefully in the towns they've conquered until they're called into battle. (And then, IDK, their deaths in battle are just not canon or something?)
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snivylovegames
I post daily polls about the battle cats to try and bring the Forums closer together!
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Post by snivylovegames on Nov 11, 2024 3:59:35 GMT
I'm working on my canon for the enemies rn- All I've got is that they must defend their homeland or something like that-
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Post by BaniTheBunny on Nov 11, 2024 15:17:51 GMT
meowsers
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snivylovegames
I post daily polls about the battle cats to try and bring the Forums closer together!
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Post by snivylovegames on Nov 11, 2024 21:49:57 GMT
Update on head canon for enemies: should be done soon but classes are making my life hell-
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snivylovegames
I post daily polls about the battle cats to try and bring the Forums closer together!
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Post by snivylovegames on Nov 12, 2024 2:38:39 GMT
FINAL UPDATE ON HEAD CANON FOR ENEMIES: Should come out tomorrow morning! ( There will be extreme yapping )
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